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''Alexander’s Journey'' (a short story)

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Rhys 🕊:
I see. I wouldn't say you don't have much an imagination to put it in a story like this. Not sure I could write like you have done. Well done  :)

Rhys

acomplishedartis:
Since I am not a writer of kid's stories, I have decided to take away the ''mystery'' of what means what on this little story. Also I believe that it will add a new dimension of appreciation for the ones that doesn't have any idea of the meanings.

This short was mostly full of similes, and it's not a metaphor (it's not that deep), for the most part.


ONE YEAR journey of Alexander  = 2012

Alexander = you guess...

being a boy scout = being a truth seeker

place where Alexander grew up = a city in Mexico called 'morelia'

kun city = the city of ''cancun''

phone = my lap top

Ian = my cousin Beto.  and  Lia = his girl friend

the good place to settle down out of the city of kun = an small town called ''puerto morelos''

Joe = My friend Jerry who came visit from NY

works to survive; fixing fences and stuff = independent welding works

hard job in the city Kun; fixing things on dangerous places = a job making metal structures for awnings

the ‘united corporation’. = U.S.A

Sand = San Diego Cal.

Sr.D = my friend Donald

Al = my friend Alex


There is it. Clear and simple.

ps. I had to do it before Christians start looking for the city of 'Kun' and 'Sand' in the map   : )

Moises

Rhys 🕊:
Excellent stuff Moises. I'm sure that helps. Most of us are not too bright here (I mean I'm not too bright).

Good point about the Christians. You have to watch out for them with there maps.  ;D

Rhys

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