Dear, L.RAYSMITH
interesting, i am impressed by your exquisite overly excessive use of flowery vocabulary in your article, but quite frankly, there is too much of it for me to make sence of. so maybe, if you find your self with enough free time, you could outline the basic plot of your story.
Dear Ian: I use virtually NO "exquisite overly excessive use of flowery vocabulary" in any of my articles. And no, I absolutely cannot find the time to outline all my articles. Sorry. I write on a high school level or a little lower. If I write on an even lower level, many people will think I am a child and will not read my material. I do the best I can. All of my material is stated very clearly, with modest vocabulary, and repeated over and again, replete with simple analogies, etc., to make the meaning clear.
God be with you,
Ray