I read your paper and think it is very well written. You build your case for how to prove a biblical doctrine and use the Greek words to show the real meaning of many words.
I always had problems with the teaching that we go to heaven or hell right after we die. It never made sense that people were enjoying heaven or suffering in hell. Yet the Bible says they would be judged at the white throne judgment. Why are they being judged, if they have already been judged? Now I know, all dead people are dead. If I fell asleep for 100 years I wouldn't know how long I was asleep. I remember being very sick with the flu and slept for 24 hours. It seemed like a few minutes. So this is how I liken people being in the grave. It will only seem like a few minutes.
Here are some more scriptures I am sure you have seen, but I thought they are important if anyone tries to disprove your paper.
Romans.6:12 Do not let sin reign in your mortal{subject to death} body that you should obey its lusts.
Romans 8:11 But the spirit of him who raised Jesus from the dead dwells in you, He who raised Christ Jesus from the dead will also give life to your mortal bodies through his spirit who indwells you.
1 Cor.15:53 For this perishable must put on the imperishable, and this mortal must put on immortality. vs54 says But when this perishable will have put on the imperishable, and this mortal will have put on immortality, then will come about the saying that is written, Death is swallowed up in victory.
These are a few scriptures I found. I will let you know if I find anymore.
Just remember, the holy spirit is the one who does the work, so you have given them enough information and it is only if God wills for them to see that they will. Let us know how things go after your pastor reads this.
I sent my ex-pastor information about UR and he just said I was in a cult and was chasing after every wind of doctrine. The truth is, I no longer chase after every wind of doctrine, because I have been shown the truth and no longer need to search for it.